2009-07-20

Renhai Reflections 125: Never a Dull Moment


Never a Dull Moment

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

A car speeds off —
a pop can and a wrapper
added to the trash. /vs

Distant thundering sounds — /vs
wind shifts the surface dust. /zh.r

Runover possum
on my gravel shoulder —
turkey vultures. /zh.r

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7 comments:

Devika said...

Yes, Masago amd Zhanna...life till the end,

here, the second is my interest! :)

wishes

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

not a happy story, but I love it. :)

John McDonald said...

a feeling of great haste well done
john

jaydee said...

Didn't like the visual the possum verse conjured up.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Alberto said...

great! I love this!

http://haikuneverdie.blogspot.com/

jem said...

It's not often that you'd think of a busy road as inspiration for poetry, but you've proved here, that if you care to look, it's there.