2009-08-07

Renhai Reflections 130: On Board


On Board

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)

Window seat...
light then dark
dark then light. /bk

The smell of oiled timber — /vs
riding the rails, a runaway. /bk

He grabs her hand
as they rush the summit —
roller coaster. /vs

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10 comments:

Devika said...

An enjoyable train journey through tunnels, Masago and Betty :)

the last --am failing to get it clearly,

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

Very nice. :)

John McDonald said...

wheeeee!!!!! good one
john

Masago said...

Thank you all.

Devika, are you familiar with roller coasters where you are?

Devika said...

Roller coasters...I don't go near it! Some amusement parks have it :)

I am afraid of this head spinning games...even if its fun :)

I was looking for a straight connection between 1 & 3...and hence that comment, Masago :)

wishes,
devika

Masago said...

Devika, Ah, I see. :-) Hopefully the comments clarified things.

Devika said...

yes Masago :)

devika

borut said...

Lonely at the top?!:)

RBroeker said...

Puuh, this goes up and down very fast. And when I finished this Renhai, I wanted to start again. Good one!

Best wishes
Ralf

Paula said...

I like it. :)

It's always very pleasant to visit your blog and read your work.