Renhai Reflections 131: Time Off

Time Off

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Sunday evening crowd;
a steelband in the park plays
vintage music. /gc

Pink clouds through the church window — /gc
the hot breeze rustles a page. /vs

Summer holidays —
banana splits at the old
ice cream parlour. /vs

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RBroeker said...

Great scene. Feel like on a holiday. Haven't been in Trinidad yet, but I started to listen to the sound and to smell this special feeling. Think I am suffering of itchy feet. Thanks a lot for that, Gillena and Vaughn.

Best wishes

Devika said...

Very nice set, Gillena and Masago

I especially liked the second...and the links are really interesting....especially 2/3 :)


Borut said...

Cool! Time. Vintage music... Pink Floyd!?:)

John McDonald said...


J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love anything that has music in it. :)

Kristin Riggs said...

Oh...these take me away to a happy place. I love all of them! :)

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Janice Thomson said...

Love the touch of yesteryear in each verse.
Excellent writing Gillena and Vaughn.