2009-08-26

Renhai Reflections 134: Drawn Up


Drawn Up

A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The sleeping mount
rumbles back to life —
molten cauldron. /vs

Dreaming of lake sailing — /vs
awakened... the leaf blower. /bk

A blue sea beckons ...
waiting in the marina
"Suzie Q". /bk

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10 comments:

Devika said...

There's enough to draw one to life...and some mentions I like about it --dreaming, awakened, blue sea, marina....words that I love :)

Enjoyable series, Betty and Masago :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

yes most enjoyable
john

RBroeker said...

Wonderful voyage in my mind. At least I see the my father's early love. Very nice.

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs said...

I like the part about waking up...hard to snap back to reality sometimes. :)

Zhanna P. Rader said...

I enjoyed it.
Zhanna

Janice Thomson said...

A most enjoyable multi-faceted Renhai. Great work Betty and Vaughn.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice work.

Bill said...

after a long drive
rain on the lake . . .
so soothing

Pamela said...

go back to sleep mountain -- (:

Masago said...

Thank you all very much!