2009-08-21

Renhai Reflections 133: Fleeting Moments


Fleeting Moments

A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

She mumbles,
"He loves me, loves me not" —
white petals, scattered. /zh.r

Plump, cottony clouds — /zh.r
tethered hot-air balloon. /vs

Merry-go-round —
I push faster, the others
hanging on. /vs

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11 comments:

Dalloway said...

good one

Devika said...

Good set, love the last one :)

in going fast is the merriment...well, merry go round and a swing is the only fast ride I enjoyed as child and still enjoy...even there some cannot!:)

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

Love this...first one is my favorite. I was that little girl pulling off petals...a hopeless romantic from day one!

Devika said...

Kristin, you got company....another hopeless romantic here...I wonder which woman is not! :)

Dalloway -- any comments??

Masago...all, with your permission...and request to remove if deemed foul :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

another good set
john

Janice Thomson said...

Fleeting moments indeed yet evocative ones to the reader. Lovely verses Zhanna and Vaughn.

RBroeker said...

Wunderfull rhythmn in this. Very nice.

Best wishes
Ralf

Cindybrown said...

Very, very nice:)

Pamela said...

I've missed a week or two.
This one even reminded me of my queasy stomach after riding in circles.

Bill said...

"a la folie–-"
she still doesn't
love me

she loves me
at last I've found
the right daisy

Masago said...

Thank you all very much!

Bill: too funny.