2009-08-21
Renhai Reflections 133: Fleeting Moments
Fleeting Moments
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
She mumbles,
"He loves me, loves me not" —
white petals, scattered. /zh.r
Plump, cottony clouds — /zh.r
tethered hot-air balloon. /vs
Merry-go-round —
I push faster, the others
hanging on. /vs
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11 comments:
good one
Good set, love the last one :)
in going fast is the merriment...well, merry go round and a swing is the only fast ride I enjoyed as child and still enjoy...even there some cannot!:)
wishes,
devika
Love this...first one is my favorite. I was that little girl pulling off petals...a hopeless romantic from day one!
Kristin, you got company....another hopeless romantic here...I wonder which woman is not! :)
Dalloway -- any comments??
Masago...all, with your permission...and request to remove if deemed foul :)
wishes,
devika
another good set
john
Fleeting moments indeed yet evocative ones to the reader. Lovely verses Zhanna and Vaughn.
Wunderfull rhythmn in this. Very nice.
Best wishes
Ralf
Very, very nice:)
I've missed a week or two.
This one even reminded me of my queasy stomach after riding in circles.
"a la folie–-"
she still doesn't
love me
she loves me
at last I've found
the right daisy
Thank you all very much!
Bill: too funny.
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