full moon...
a frog hops off
the lily pad
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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Ice Can Look Nice4 years ago
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A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
8 comments:
well, it that is not old Basho talking here ...
Gabi
. Happy Haiku Gallery .
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Smart frog!! Like this one alot!!
Just right. The Basho echo doesn't stop this from being your own, and one to be proud of at that.
good one!
Thanks everyone. BTW, I can see the Basho echo however it wasn't intentional.
:) this made me smile
where's my previous comment!? - not the first time blogger swallowed them...
never mind, i'll say again: i really like this one, and i feel that basho echo, too.
Here is one more this reminds me of:
from the talest lily
he partakes of the sunset
the tiny frog
and here is how this looks (the lily was an iris as I discovered later ...)
. The Tallest Lily .
Greetings from Japan
Gabi
. Happy Haiku Gallery .
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