2008-02-04

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-2]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

Nice progression. :)

Borut said...

Another revelation or two, and we'll see...!?:)

John McDonald said...

tense
john

floots said...

a very special moment
thank you

Pat Paulk said...

Can never stay hidden, something/someone always exposes us. Love it!!

polona said...

ah, the anticipation... lovely!

Ričardas said...

let them free :) nice pieces

Masago said...

Aurora: Thanks.

Borut: :-)

John: Thanks.

Floots: Thank You.

Pat: That's for sure. Thanks.

Polona: Thanks.

Ričardas: Thank you.