Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.
Her friend holds / the half-spud... the needle's tip / sinks through.
A snowboarder plows under — his partner offers his hand.

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Aurora Antonovic said...

I like anything with snow in it. :)

Borut said...

A friend in need is a friend indeed.:)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...


floots said...

lot of pain and pleasure in these last two
(no piercings for me) :)

polona said...

no damage done, i hope

Masago said...

Aurora: Me too. :-)

Borut: For sure (especially if you're on the receiving end).

Andrew: :-)

Floots: Thanks (me too).

Polona: I don't think so.