2008-02-06

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)


The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.
Her friend holds / the half-spud... the needle's tip / sinks through.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

Good progression.

John McDonald said...

nice
john

Pat Paulk said...

A fisherman that tells the truth, that's amazing!!

polona said...

interesting... can't figure it out yet :)

Masago said...

Aurora: Thanks.

John: Thank you.

Pat: Ha, ha... good point!

Polona: :-)