2008-06-24

Rengay Through the Seasons #43 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 22-28, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

Long day — the sun goes to bed / after I do.
We get ice-cream cones — a lick sends my scoop flying.
Rising tide — a wave laps over the last / of the castle.


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6 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

Love the imagery and have watched this many a time when kids build sand castles.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

ooh, things are ending in this......

John McDonald said...

good one vaughn
john

polona said...
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polona said...

sorry, typos...

natural forces don't care about our intentions... love this one

Masago said...

Janice: And I'd be one of the "kids". ;-)

Andrew: Yes, that seems to be a common thread in these as we head toward the end of this series. :-)

John: Thank you.

Polona: Yes, it can sometimes be so rude. :-)