by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 22-28, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
Long day — the sun goes to bed / after I do.
We get ice-cream cones — a lick sends my scoop flying.
Rising tide — a wave laps over the last / of the castle.
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6 comments:
Love the imagery and have watched this many a time when kids build sand castles.
ooh, things are ending in this......
good one vaughn
john
sorry, typos...
natural forces don't care about our intentions... love this one
Janice: And I'd be one of the "kids". ;-)
Andrew: Yes, that seems to be a common thread in these as we head toward the end of this series. :-)
John: Thank you.
Polona: Yes, it can sometimes be so rude. :-)
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