by Gary Gay (gg) and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #48 (Aug 24-30, 2008) Verses 1-2 (of 6):
Summer thunder — fireflies blink among / the tall corn. /gg
Corndogs in each hand — we wade through the crowd. /vs
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8 comments:
I like both of these - thanks
The crowd: a perfect place for a corn-dog!?:)
looks good
john
This ripening up in an interesting way. I wonder if your theme will be corn? At the moment I'm getting a distinctly U.S. atmosphere which is great - always good when writing has a clear regional flavour.
Don't like crowds but love the image you give us. An intriguing start here...
interesting... i can still see a couple of ways this can go...
I'm a dog man myself. Be careful with the mustard this time.
Andrew: Thank you!
Borut: Ha, ha! Thanks.
John: Thanks.
Jem: Thank you... it could be US although I think it could fit in parts of Canada too. :-)
Janice: Thanks (I'm with you with respect to crowds).
Polona: Ah, the pleasure of reading a rengay for the first time (at least in this fashion). :-) Thanks.
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