2009-02-28
Renhai Reflections 83: Again
Again
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Yesterday's puddles
polished by driven flakes —
parking lot.
Another snowy day —
the field path deepens.
Mall entrance —
wet prints track off
into the hallway.
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[Just when spring felt like it was around the corner we got a week of every day of falling snow. This Renhai was therefore born out of this happy misery.]
2009-02-24
Renhai Reflections 82: Against the Cold
Against the Cold
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)
Written: April 16-20, 2008
Mountain hut —
we huddle around the one
cooking pancakes. /vs
Sheltered under a bridge — /vs
a homeless man finding warmth. /bk
Cold winter night —
she protects the outside plants
with plastic. /bk
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0016.htm
2009-02-22
Renhai Reflections 81: Spring Signatures
Spring Signatures
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
Brier branch —
a tuft of hair from
a Speckled goat. /vs
Snow patches here and there — /vs
green arrows of daffodils. /zh.r
New grass —
her polka-dot dress
picks up a stain. /zh.r
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0013.htm
[This is another early Renhai. I am presenting some of these from a year ago here now as they have not previously appeared in this blog.]
2009-02-19
Renhai Reflections 80: Change of Plans
Change of Plans
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
The old oak —
a branch in the blizzard
falls to the ground.
The power cuts suddenly —
moonlight on snow outside.
Crackling fire —
embers flicker patterns
across her cheek.
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0122.htm
2009-02-15
Renhai Reflections 79: Rubber Boots
Rubber Boots
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
A groundhog
emerges from its den —
last-year's yellow grass. /zh.r
Drips from melting snow — /vs
camellia buds plump out. /zh.r
A foot comes free
but the rubber stays stuck —
mud patch. /vs
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0012.htm
[Here as another from last year; this one from around the time of groundhog day.]
2009-02-12
Renhai Reflections 77: A Magic Ride
A Magic Ride
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Late afternoon —
the sun warms this leaf,
my coloured floor.
A sudden breeze rises —
airborne across the yard!
Tumbling, flipping...
my magic carpet finds
a place to land.
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0121.htm
[We had a few Renhai looking forward to Spring. This one looks back to Autumn. Note that this is in the style of "from their perspective" (in this case from a bug's).]
2009-02-10
Renhai Reflections 77: Being Myself
Being Myself
I always like to go outside
When darkness fills the skies.
In flight, my ears are open wide,
And not my beady eyes.
I do not care for fancy snacks,
I'd sooner munch on flies.
And beetles found in nooks and cracks
Are quite a yummy prize.
When sun comes up I find the caves
To snooze the day away -
No time to catch more echo waves
For finding other prey.
While hanging upside-down to rest
From any rocky shelf,
I know I'll do my very best
To be... well, just myself.
[Here is a "who am I?" type children's rhyme I recently wrote, again with much help from Zhanna.]
2009-02-08
Renhai Reflections 76: Along a Highway
Along a Highway
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
"Are we there yet?"
on the way to grandma's —
packages galore. /bk
A hitch-hiker holds a card — /vs
the dog's ears flap in the wind. /bk
A truck whizzes by —
the loose tarp exposes
a bed and chair. /bk
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0011.htm
[This is another Renhai written about a year ago.]
2009-02-06
Chattering Jay
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Time to pay for
the dinner — he discovers
his wallet is gone. /vs
The snowman loses his nose — /zh.r
a jay chatters from above. /vs
New gossip
quickly spreads around —
the wife learns last. /zh.r
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0004.htm
[This is a Renhai written about a year ago.]
Renhai Reflections 75: Chattering Jay
Chattering Jay
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Time to pay for
the dinner — he discovers
his wallet is gone. /vs
The snowman loses his nose — /zh.r
a jay chatters from above. /vs
New gossip
quickly spreads around —
the wife learns last. /zh.r
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0004.htm
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Time to pay for
the dinner — he discovers
his wallet is gone. /vs
The snowman loses his nose — /zh.r
a jay chatters from above. /vs
New gossip
quickly spreads around —
the wife learns last. /zh.r
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0004.htm
2009-02-02
Renhai Reflections 74: Close to Home
Close to Home
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Up-turned cap —
a coin tossed in evokes
a solemn, "Thanks." /vs
A blanket under the tree — /vs
close by, a tattered coat. /jt
Street corner —
he begs for dog food,
pups at his feet. /jt
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0120.htm
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