2009-02-08

Renhai Reflections 76: Along a Highway


Along a Highway

A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

"Are we there yet?"
on the way to grandma's —
packages galore. /bk

A hitch-hiker holds a card — /vs
the dog's ears flap in the wind. /bk

A truck whizzes by —
the loose tarp exposes
a bed and chair. /bk

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[This is another Renhai written about a year ago.]

10 comments:

Devika said...

Full of life --

Ordinariness of life well captured -- Nice work, Masago and Betty...

wishes,
devika

Borut said...

Like all True Highways, this one, too, ends with a revelation of sorts!:)

John McDonald said...

love it
john

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

brings me back to childhood. :)

polona said...

like devika, what strikes me most is the life in these verses.
good one!

Pamela said...

Are we there yet!
On the way to everywhere.

Masago said...

Thank you all so much (on behalf of Betty and me).

jem said...

Nice - little stories in each of these snapshots. I like the line about the dog's ears especially.

Janice Thomson said...

Love that familiar first line. Each of these was a neat image. Great work!

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