2009-02-08
Renhai Reflections 76: Along a Highway
Along a Highway
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
"Are we there yet?"
on the way to grandma's —
packages galore. /bk
A hitch-hiker holds a card — /vs
the dog's ears flap in the wind. /bk
A truck whizzes by —
the loose tarp exposes
a bed and chair. /bk
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[This is another Renhai written about a year ago.]
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10 comments:
Full of life --
Ordinariness of life well captured -- Nice work, Masago and Betty...
wishes,
devika
Like all True Highways, this one, too, ends with a revelation of sorts!:)
love it
john
brings me back to childhood. :)
like devika, what strikes me most is the life in these verses.
good one!
Are we there yet!
On the way to everywhere.
Thank you all so much (on behalf of Betty and me).
Nice - little stories in each of these snapshots. I like the line about the dog's ears especially.
Love that familiar first line. Each of these was a neat image. Great work!
Congratulations for your great site! Congratulations and good continuation!
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