2009-02-24

Renhai Reflections 82: Against the Cold


Against the Cold

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)
Written: April 16-20, 2008

Mountain hut —
we huddle around the one
cooking pancakes. /vs

Sheltered under a bridge — /vs
a homeless man finding warmth. /bk

Cold winter night —
she protects the outside plants
with plastic. /bk

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0016.htm

11 comments:

Devika said...

Good series, Masago

My heart goes out for the second one...

wishes,
devika

Dalloway said...

I agree with Betty - 'finding' is more emotive. Your notes are a useful addition.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I see nothing good in cold weather and you both captured it perfectly.

Borut said...

Well done!:)

John McDonald said...

yes very well done
john

polona said...

seeking warmth... yep, this winter has been long enough i anyone asks me ;)

jem said...

Nice one - again very inclusive. Food, shelter, warmth. All important. A lot of love in this one too.

get zapped said...

Whoa, makes me chilly! Nice.

Masago said...

Thank you all on behalf of Betty and me.

Devika said...

came for a new one, Masago

come again later :)

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson said...

Well done indeed - one gets a good sense of the cold in these.