2009-02-24
Renhai Reflections 82: Against the Cold
Against the Cold
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Betty Kaplan (bk)
Written: April 16-20, 2008
Mountain hut —
we huddle around the one
cooking pancakes. /vs
Sheltered under a bridge — /vs
a homeless man finding warmth. /bk
Cold winter night —
she protects the outside plants
with plastic. /bk
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0016.htm
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11 comments:
Good series, Masago
My heart goes out for the second one...
wishes,
devika
I agree with Betty - 'finding' is more emotive. Your notes are a useful addition.
I see nothing good in cold weather and you both captured it perfectly.
Well done!:)
yes very well done
john
seeking warmth... yep, this winter has been long enough i anyone asks me ;)
Nice one - again very inclusive. Food, shelter, warmth. All important. A lot of love in this one too.
Whoa, makes me chilly! Nice.
Thank you all on behalf of Betty and me.
came for a new one, Masago
come again later :)
wishes,
devika
Well done indeed - one gets a good sense of the cold in these.
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