Renhai Reflections 77: A Magic Ride

A Magic Ride

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Late afternoon —
the sun warms this leaf,
my coloured floor.

A sudden breeze rises —
airborne across the yard!

Tumbling, flipping...
my magic carpet finds
a place to land.

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[We had a few Renhai looking forward to Spring. This one looks back to Autumn. Note that this is in the style of "from their perspective" (in this case from a bug's).]


Devika said...

This is nice, Masago

a magic felt :)


John McDonald said...

good one again

jem said...

Fun. Made me smile. It's good to play with being outside our own perspective. Somehow when we come back to it, we are more aware and appreciate, having temporarily tried someone/something elses.

polona said...

again, this has a child-like quality.
enjoyed the read :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

yes, good one :)

Dalloway said...

Glad to have found your blog, Masago. These have been a great read this evening.

kind regards,

Masago said...

Thank you all, very much!

Dalloway: thanks for coming 'round; I plan to keep an eye on your blog. :-)

Devika said...

came for a new one, Masago..

come again later :)


Borut said...

For a magic ride,
Sometimes all that you need is
A magic carpet.

Janice Thomson said...

How neat - I really liked this one!

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