2009-07-28
Renhai Reflections 128: Popped to Please
Popped to Please
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
A buttery scent
emanates from the kitchen —
a three-voiced "Popcorn!" /zh.r
Each popped kernel, threaded... /vs
the garland hangs on her neck. /zh.r
The lights come on —
bits of popcorn on my lap
and in the seat. /vs
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6 comments:
Yes popped to please,
pleasing set, Masago and Zhanna :)
but, the second somehow reminded of a lady doctor here who was made to wear a garland of shoes for an operation that turned fatal!
wishes,
devika
On first sight it looks a bit like a time-journey: children shout - and then I see the beginning of a wild romance. Even the title makes me smile (and I am sure all this has got something to do with the German way of using the word "to popp" ;-). Thanks for a fine renhai.
Best wishes
Ralf
such a happy one
john
Thanks all!
Made me smile, especially that last one - glad I'm not the only messy eater.
Apparently you can string plain popcorn onto threads and hang it in trees for the birds. I fancy trying that.
This one is very cheerful and the name is adorable!
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