2009-08-02
Renhai Reflections 129: After The Storms
After The Storms
A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
This early morning
the sun's reflection plays —
sparkling clean windows. /bk
Summer storms every afternoon — /bk
the creek flows a bit deeper. /vs
Garden chores —
he empties the wheelbarrow
of rain water. /vs
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There is a deep silence in it. And suddenly: the storms return. Quiet again. And then: the sound of water. Love this.
Best wishes
Ralf
Nice set, Bety and Kaplan :)
enjoyed all..and i liked the second..creek or crook, a little more depth is always interesting :))
wishes,
devika
very nice.
Oh i said Betty and Kaplan....meant to say, Betty and Masago :)
wishes,
devika
nice.....
reminds me of when I was a kid...except for the clean windows (:
This is a more acurate portrait of my summer. There is somethign refreshing about stepping out after a storm and seeing what's changed. All the plants seem a little shell-shocked, but they quickly bounce back with renewed life.
like the resonance in the chores
much love
gillena
I love these. The imagery is very vivid in my mind.
this is so fitting! we had a thunderstorm this evening- a big one.
love it
john
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