2006-03-15

602. A Snowflake

tenth floor...
a snowflake drifts near
then floats away

5 comments:

its_baxter said...

actually, its about him playing a baseball video game while on the phone with me...and he struck out...literally. not with me. :) its just a fun one i wanted to write. but it could be applied otherwise

its_baxter said...

and..i like this one. thats a long way for a snow flake to fall

Pat Paulk said...

Sounds like a dream

polona said...

i love this one, though i have seen way too many snowflakes this winter.

Denis said...

I like the specificity of the imagery, almost cinematic. Very nice.

Denis Garrison
Haiku & Tanka Unchained