a tear forms
on her cheek as a soap
plays on tv,
the knife in her hand
slices through an onion
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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At the Café9 months ago
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I Can Almost Smell it1 year ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet10 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
6 comments:
i love this one, great turn!
Yes, very good!
i agree: very good.
really nice!
Phew! Glad it's only the onion. For a moment I had visions of Kathy Bates in Misery dancing about my head. Thankfully, this gal's more Rachel Raye than psychotic!
really enjoyed your blog
especially the wry smile of this tanka
(thanks for the visit)
cheers
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