sandy beach...
flip-flop orphans among
driftwood and rubble
Revision:
sandy beach...
flip-flops orphaned among
driftwood and rubble
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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At the Café9 months ago
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I Can Almost Smell it1 year ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet10 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
6 comments:
:) gives great images
Thanks Baxter...perhaps I need to clarify this one a bit. When we were at a beach in the Caribbean we found numerous old flip-flops (i.e. beach slippers) that had washed ashore. They had no "mom" or "dad" any more and they were also separated from their mates. Some of them were also in pretty bad shape.
I am glad you clarified the flip flops (very Kiwi term that!) I thought that it may have been stranded creatures. You manage great images in few words. I've only dabbled a little in this form. Frances
Good one! I can see both flip-flopping in the waves.
thanks for clarifying this one. i agree, you have the ability to produce great images.
sandy beach...
flip-flop orphans among
driftwood and rubble
Revision:
sandy beach...
flip-flops orphaned among
driftwood and rubble
This revision was suggested by Bill:
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