by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.
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6 comments:
The new one is FANTASTIC. Love it
made me smile good one
john
ditto :)
thank you
nice :)
I've never figured out ice fishing!
Pamela: Thank you!
John: :-) Thanks.
Floots: Thanks.
Polona: Thank you.
Andrew: I hear ya, I haven't really done it myself, just watched as a kid.
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