2008-02-05

Rengay Through the Seasons #23 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #23 (Feb 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

The crack of ice / over the sound of a trickle — frozen waterfall.
Behind the curtain, motionless — the boy's turn to go on stage.
Ice fishing / all day long — my lunch, the only bite.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

6 comments:

Pamela said...

The new one is FANTASTIC. Love it

John McDonald said...

made me smile good one
john

floots said...

ditto :)
thank you

polona said...

nice :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I've never figured out ice fishing!

Masago said...

Pamela: Thank you!

John: :-) Thanks.

Floots: Thanks.

Polona: Thank you.

Andrew: I hear ya, I haven't really done it myself, just watched as a kid.