2008-02-19

Rengay Through the Seasons #25 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #25 (Feb 17-23, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

A school of fish / under the lake ice — deep winter.
Recess, one hour away — thoughts of fun and snow.
We come inside / after the bell... the smell / of wet woolens.


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6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

not something I want to smell :)

floots said...

boy - this takes me back a long way

Borut said...

Ditto Andrew and Floots.:)

John McDonald said...

well captured
john

polona said...

nice progression

Masago said...

Andrew: :-) ...especially someone else's.

Floots: :-)

Borut: :-) :-)

John: Thanks.

Polona: Thank you.