2009-01-11
Renhai Reflections 66: Winter Reaches
Winter Reaches
A Renhai by
Janice Thomson (jt) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Snow-laden woods —
my toque touches the end
of a pine bough. /jt
Bone-piercing cold — the click /zh.r
of her needles faster yet. /zh.r
Icy sidewalk —
his dog garbed with vest,
hat, and booties. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0113.htm
[This is the second three-person renhai written, click on the notes for a description of how this one was written. Click here to view the first three-way written.]
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13 comments:
Interesting work, by three of you..
I read the first one also...again, interesting, Masago
while my poetic mind takes a back seat here; i should say there's something very interesting about the way, life scenes shift in Renhai...
wishes,
devika
Dog's life - winter reaches.
yes interesting work
john
I like the collaboration here.
Thank you all!
I love the ones that you two do. :)
Good one, and for me very apt for the season. I love passing through each little scene. The one that struck me most was the middle one - those needles. As if she is warming herself with her activity as well as hurrying along the knitting of the jumper / scarf etc.
Well done to all three of you.
exquisite
much love
gillena
have you guys beent o slovenia lately? i'm freezing here ;)
looking forward to other two
I was really tired last night and didn't notice that there were 3 of you! Still like it. :)
toque - a word not heard often in my circles.
curious also about the clicking needles? knitting?
is the dog yours by any chance?
My thanks too for all your comments. :)
Pamela: Yes, knitting. No, It wasn't my dog... I saw it being walked on one of the really cold days.
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