2010-02-17

Renhai Reflections 171: Cupid's Aim


Cupid's Aim

A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

so long ago...
in a bed of red roses
that first kiss /bk

his and mine carved in a heart... /bk
our walk together, a dream? /vs

yet now to feel
your warm embrace, and touch
each soft lip... /vs

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[Several of us wrote renhai for Valentine's Day. Here is another written with Betty Kaplan.]

7 comments:

Devika said...

Oh! this is sensuous...yet, beautiful valentine verse, Betty and Masago :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

lovely
john

Bill said...

Nice.

Gillena said...

ah! sweet memories! love this so much

much love
gillena

RBroeker said...

Full of emotions. But every carve is a sort of scar, too. A wonderful piece of poetry.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thanks all!

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