2010-02-17

Renhai Reflections 171: Cupid's Aim


Cupid's Aim

A Renhai by Betty Kaplan (bk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

so long ago...
in a bed of red roses
that first kiss /bk

his and mine carved in a heart... /bk
our walk together, a dream? /vs

yet now to feel
your warm embrace, and touch
each soft lip... /vs

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[Several of us wrote renhai for Valentine's Day. Here is another written with Betty Kaplan.]

7 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Oh! this is sensuous...yet, beautiful valentine verse, Betty and Masago :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

lovely
john

Bill said...

Nice.

Unknown said...

ah! sweet memories! love this so much

much love
gillena

Ralf Bröker said...

Full of emotions. But every carve is a sort of scar, too. A wonderful piece of poetry.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thanks all!

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