Waterlogged...
ripple reflections dance
on the surface.
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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9 comments:
1024. On the Bottom
Waterlogged...
ripple reflections dance
on the surface.
Link with 1023: Waterlogged.
[In a mountain lake the water is usually fresh and crystal clear. In this haiku there is an image of an old waterlogged piece of wood at the bottom of the lake. Its reflection on the surface of the water is rippled by a gentle mountain breeze.]
Beautiful.
nice one vaughn
john
The older you get ripples become wrinkles and don't go away.
i can see it... beautiful!
I know the lake
beatiful as a piece of description
also a great metaphor for our thought processes
(well - mine anyway) :)
Floots: You have an amazing mind! Thanks buddy.
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