2007-05-16

1024. On the Bottom

Waterlogged...
ripple reflections dance
on the surface.

9 comments:

Masago said...

1024. On the Bottom

Waterlogged...
ripple reflections dance
on the surface.

Link with 1023: Waterlogged.

[In a mountain lake the water is usually fresh and crystal clear. In this haiku there is an image of an old waterlogged piece of wood at the bottom of the lake. Its reflection on the surface of the water is rippled by a gentle mountain breeze.]

gautami tripathy said...

Beautiful.

John McDonald said...

nice one vaughn
john

Pat Paulk said...

The older you get ripples become wrinkles and don't go away.

polona said...

i can see it... beautiful!

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Pamela said...

I know the lake

floots said...

beatiful as a piece of description
also a great metaphor for our thought processes
(well - mine anyway) :)

Masago said...

Floots: You have an amazing mind! Thanks buddy.