Blanket of velvet-gray fog — /zr
a crow pierces the silence. /vs
This middle verse not only portrays an image of nature but it also contains a number of potential themes and things that could be used for linking with other verses. I.e.:
- Flat, Blanket-like.
- Covering, Permeating.
- Velvety, Soft.
- Black-coloured, Dark.
- Fog, Mist, Rain, Steam, Cloud-like.
- Stillness, Silence.
- Crow, Bird, Animal.
- Cawing, Bird call.
- Piercing (sound), Interruption.
After some discussion, at this point Zhanna and I decided that we liked the idea of "Permeating" and decided to write the other verses to this theme. The other verses would therefore support this theme and also reference one or more of the above objects, actions, and descriptions in their linkages.
As Zhanna wrote the first line of this middle verse, it was her turn to write the next verse.
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