2008-09-08

Renhai Reflections 8: Introduction #8

Renhai Anatomy: The Third Verse

With a season of autumn and a theme of "Permeating", Zhanna wrote the following third verse:

Blanket of velvet-gray fog — /zr
a crow pierces the silence. /vs

Coffee aroma
permeates the morning air —
sudden rain... /zr

You can see that the theme is supported by the coffee aroma permeating the morning air. The link back to the middle verse is the concept of interruption, i.e.:
  • Middle verse: crow interrupting the silence.
  • Third verse: sudden rain interrupting the morning.
The last verse to be written, the first verse, must now support the theme of "Permeating" as well as somehow link back to both of these verses.

Next: Renhai Anatomy: The First Verse

6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

well done!

John McDonald said...

yes well done
john

Janice Thomson said...

Well done indeed! Am enjoying this study of your Renhai.

Pamela said...

I GET IT!!!
Reading thru the past posts and then this one, it jumped right out at me.

I'm looking forward to this series.

Masago said...

Andrew: Thanks.

John: Thank you.

Janice: Many thanks.

Pamela: I'm pleased you are getting it. Thanks!

Labella Labella said...

I enjoyed reading it and I think other readers might enjoy reading it as well.Thanks.
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