Renhai Reflections 8: Introduction #8

Renhai Anatomy: The Third Verse

With a season of autumn and a theme of "Permeating", Zhanna wrote the following third verse:

Blanket of velvet-gray fog — /zr
a crow pierces the silence. /vs

Coffee aroma
permeates the morning air —
sudden rain... /zr

You can see that the theme is supported by the coffee aroma permeating the morning air. The link back to the middle verse is the concept of interruption, i.e.:

• Middle verse: crow interrupting the silence.
• Third verse: sudden rain interrupting the morning.

The last verse to be written, the first verse, must now support the theme of "Permeating" as well as somehow link back to both of these verses.

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