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2009-04-04
Renhai Reflections 94: Spanning Years
Spanning Years
A Renhai by Ron Seward & Vaughn Seward
The boys' feet
in the old copper tub —
log shack. /rs
A twenty-eight Wippet — /rs
the first family car. /vs
Last farmstead —
finding years later
just a calendar. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0136.htm
[Check the notes for some historical details.]
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10 comments:
I enjoyed reading the notes here,
Good to know a bit of family history through the Renhai, Vaughn :)
wishes,
devika
Vaughn, I enjoyed your renhai and the footnotes. You and your father have done well.
Zhanna
I think theres a haibun in this. The notes were a good read.
Without sentimentality, but full of rich images. Very good as far as I can tell.
Best wishes
Ralf
Poignant that last verse. Wonderful images from the past. Excellent info/notes.
"just a calendar"- I like that
top class one, well done both
john
There are all kinds of calendars. The sad news is the pages are always running out.
Well done.
Thank you all!
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