2009-04-07

Renhai Reflections 95: Made to Please


Made to Please

A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

In a small hand,
I glide across the paper —
the trees, a house... red. /zh.r

Last week, strong and tall — /vs
Now I'm just a little stub. /zh.r

The puppy's face
grows larger, comes closer —
teeth and gums... /vs

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8 comments:

Devika said...

I doubt if someone will be pleased by this, Masago...wonder why it was titled so!

but I like the first one...

the third reminds me of my neighbour's Pomeranian...a a small but fierce one!

wishes,
devika

wishes

John McDonald said...

wonderful - taken from an inanimate pespective- great idea
john

bandit said...

Endearing-quite the progression-it took Mr.McDonald's comment to "wake me up", though.
I think I shall go ask my coffee cup to advise me on the day.
Stop by my place for a moon viewing party if you will; a few have already arrived.

polona said...

ha, another delightful one.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice :)

Janice Thomson said...

I very much enjoy these ones for children - well done you two!

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Devika, crayons are made for kids to colour with, for their artistic pleasure. Also, the title can also be referring to the pictures that are coloured, that please those they are coloured for.

Devika said...

oh okay, that way :)

wishes,
devika