2009-04-07
Renhai Reflections 95: Made to Please
Made to Please
A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
In a small hand,
I glide across the paper —
the trees, a house... red. /zh.r
Last week, strong and tall — /vs
Now I'm just a little stub. /zh.r
The puppy's face
grows larger, comes closer —
teeth and gums... /vs
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8 comments:
I doubt if someone will be pleased by this, Masago...wonder why it was titled so!
but I like the first one...
the third reminds me of my neighbour's Pomeranian...a a small but fierce one!
wishes,
devika
wishes
wonderful - taken from an inanimate pespective- great idea
john
Endearing-quite the progression-it took Mr.McDonald's comment to "wake me up", though.
I think I shall go ask my coffee cup to advise me on the day.
Stop by my place for a moon viewing party if you will; a few have already arrived.
ha, another delightful one.
very nice :)
I very much enjoy these ones for children - well done you two!
Thank you all!
Devika, crayons are made for kids to colour with, for their artistic pleasure. Also, the title can also be referring to the pictures that are coloured, that please those they are coloured for.
oh okay, that way :)
wishes,
devika
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