2009-04-15

Renhai Reflections 98: Onward


Onward

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

More things
in the house than boxes —
marked-up calendar. /vs

A last look at old treasures... /jt
choosing what things to pack. /vs

I close the door —
in my hand the paper
of a new address. /jt

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7 comments:

Devika said...

Oh shifting homes are a tiresome job, but the series caught the moments quite effortlessly,

like it, Masago and Janice :)

wishes,
devika

RBroeker said...

So clear, and so much emotions in me. Very nice.

Best wishes
Ralf

polona said...

i hate moving... too stressful, but you make it seem easy
enjoyed this

Gillena Cox said...

nice the way the title and the last verse just take you full circle

much love
gillena

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

it's good to see you two back together. :)

John McDonald said...

a moving experience (in both senses)
john

Masago said...

Thank you all!