get off my head
8 hours ago
2009-04-30
Renhai Reflections 102: Looking Up, Down
Looking Up, Down
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
An alpine hut
near the mountain's summit —
long climb's end.
Old limestone basilica —
moss at the wall's base.
The toddler's hands
reach up toward grampa's
empty lap.
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12 comments:
Reaches the heights.
Nice set, Masago
very familiar images, :)
wishes,
devika
like the way old limestone links into grandpa
much love
gillena
very good
excellent work
I really like the imagery of the middle verse.
Good one Vaughn.
awww... grampa's empty lap.
excellent Vaughn
john
Where we want to go to - that doesn't matter. But we want to go to - that's it. A very vital verse.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thank you all! Your warm comments are greatly appreciated.
good one
I like the perspective in this - the way to adult eyes a mountain summit is a long way up, but to a child so is a distant lap.
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