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2009-05-12
Renhai Reflections 105: Sunrise, Sunset
Sunrise, Sunset
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)
Coral ledge —
a seahorse expels babies
from his pouch. /vs
A piece of string in the beak — /vs
among tree buds, a new nest. /jd
In the garden rocks
a snake waits for prey —
sunrise, sunset. /jd
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0040.htm
[This is the last one in the triad series that was written with John Daleiden (US) a year ago.]
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6 comments:
Again a good series, Masago and John :)
wishes,
devika
These were excellent! - such different perspectives from the same 2 lines - this is my favorite...I think :)
Live is "a piece of string in the beak". And we were born and will die. Eight lines which touch me deep.
Best wishes
Ralf
A lot to see!
Thank you all!
I've been away too long. It's good to be back and to catch up.
A lovely introduction to three little creatures.
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