2009-05-31

Renhai Reflections 110: Glitter


Glitter

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward & John W. Sexton

Mrs. Noman —
her eyes of coal glitter
in the moonlight. /jws

Our city of snow tunnels — /vs
Dad comes through the roof. /jws

We charge across
the schoolyard battlefield —
snowball artillery. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0150.htm

[This winter Renhai, which was written with John Sexton from Ireland, was just published in the June, 2009 issue of the Lynx Journal for Linking Poets. ]

9 comments:

Dalloway said...

fabulous

Devika said...

I see some glitter in there, Masago and John! :)

snowball artillery...could be fun?? :)

wishes,
devika

Borut said...

Very n...ice!:)

John McDonald said...

a terrific effort
john

RBroeker said...

Great fun to read it, great fun to look behind by reading your comment. Wonderful lyrics.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thanks All! :-)

Janice Thomson said...

Excellent.

Bill said...

Congratulations on the publication and on the work itself. Well done.

susane said...

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