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2009-05-31
Renhai Reflections 110: Glitter
Glitter
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward & John W. Sexton
Mrs. Noman —
her eyes of coal glitter
in the moonlight. /jws
Our city of snow tunnels — /vs
Dad comes through the roof. /jws
We charge across
the schoolyard battlefield —
snowball artillery. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0150.htm
[This winter Renhai, which was written with John Sexton from Ireland, was just published in the June, 2009 issue of the Lynx Journal for Linking Poets. ]
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8 comments:
fabulous
I see some glitter in there, Masago and John! :)
snowball artillery...could be fun?? :)
wishes,
devika
Very n...ice!:)
a terrific effort
john
Great fun to read it, great fun to look behind by reading your comment. Wonderful lyrics.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thanks All! :-)
Excellent.
Congratulations on the publication and on the work itself. Well done.
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