2009-05-17

Renhai Reflections 107: Till Time is Up


Till Time is Up

A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

A new minute —
I shift and sink down
with the others. /zh.r

This narrow glass passage, /zh.r
room for a few at a time. /vs

Finally through,
pushed to the clear-view wall:
eggs out of the pot. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0149.htm

8 comments:

Devika said...

Interesting series, Masago and Zhanna :)

The first reminded me of the days when we used to play in the sea waves...The note clarified :)

wishes,
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

the ending- I like that! :)

RBroeker said...

First thought was a flash-back to the drop which fell into the sea. Then I felt like drowning - and found myself as ;-) some kind of Humpti Dumpti (which is not too far away from reality). Like it!

Best wishes
Ralf

Gillena Cox said...

were these eggs boiled for colouring at Easter


much love
gillena

Masago said...

Thanks everyone! :-)

Gillena: Possibly so (but not at our house). :-)

Janice Thomson said...

This was a unique and most enjoyable perspective.

John McDonald said...

really enjoyed
john

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