2006-11-22

219. Rush Hour

a full elevator
stops on every floor...
no one gets off

[This haiku was written in October, 2005 and was recently re-written.]

[Notes]

10 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

How irritating! Happens to me off and on. :)

floots said...

oh so true
(especially so in hospitals when i am already in a state of nervous exhaustion)

Pat Paulk said...

Sardines on the move!!

gautami tripathy said...

It happened to me the day I dislocated my elbow.

Aurora said...

Everyone on his/her way to the top?:)

polona said...

and it usually happens when you're in a hurry... hate it!
good ku, though :)

Masago said...

Andrew: Yes, quite irritating!

Floots: That's when it seems to happen, eh? :-)

Pat: Well put! (And it feels like that too).

Gautami: Yikes. Not fun.

Aurora: Yes, that is one interpretation, especially if everyone trying to get on is going up too (or there's been a prankster as mentioned in the Notes). :-)

Polona: Yeah, that seems to be the case. Thanks Polona.

Amalendu said...

I echo Andrew...

Anonymous said...

And when the elevator reaches the top, doors remind closed!
A nightmare?

Masago said...

Amalendu: Thank you.

Tikkis: That would be a nightmare, no matter what floor it happened on. :-)