a full elevator
stops on every floor...
no one gets off
[This haiku was written in October, 2005 and was recently re-written.]
[Notes]
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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9 comments:
How irritating! Happens to me off and on. :)
oh so true
(especially so in hospitals when i am already in a state of nervous exhaustion)
Sardines on the move!!
It happened to me the day I dislocated my elbow.
and it usually happens when you're in a hurry... hate it!
good ku, though :)
Andrew: Yes, quite irritating!
Floots: That's when it seems to happen, eh? :-)
Pat: Well put! (And it feels like that too).
Gautami: Yikes. Not fun.
Aurora: Yes, that is one interpretation, especially if everyone trying to get on is going up too (or there's been a prankster as mentioned in the Notes). :-)
Polona: Yeah, that seems to be the case. Thanks Polona.
I echo Andrew...
And when the elevator reaches the top, doors remind closed!
A nightmare?
Amalendu: Thank you.
Tikkis: That would be a nightmare, no matter what floor it happened on. :-)
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