autumn rain —
a brown leaf plummets
to the ground
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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9 comments:
I love this one Masago. Thank you.
they are getting whipped and buffeted to the ground here -- and they are all heading for our perfect pond.
It's like the pond is a vacuum for the wind blowing through the neighbors gorgeous maple trees
Autumn War: raindrops against leaves against blameless ground.
Masago: you tell us which one was the winner sometimes?
Too much for a lone leaf to hold...Love it Vaughn!!!
Nothing to add, or take away. Simply beautiful...
enjoyed.
SB: Thank you.
Pamela: Thirsty? :-)
Tikkis: Yes, it does seem to be a war sometimes eh? I'll update you on the status. At the moment, Jack Frost seems to be have the upper hand.
Pat: You got it, Pat. Thanks.
Borut: Thank you!
Polona: My pleasure.
Aurora: I'll look into that. Thanks for the encouragement.
love the apparent (but accurate) contradictions in this one
cheers
Floots: It does seem odd, I suppose that's why it caught my attention. Thanks.
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