november day...
the rain leaves dimples
in the snow
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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Ice Can Look Nice4 years ago
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A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
10 comments:
Very nice, Masago. The term "pock marks" comes to mind with this image as well.
Dimples are engaging where as pock marks have a bad rep.
it's about to happen here.. :(
nice one vaugh
john
Ha! I just saw the title which I was completely oblivious to when I first posted. Sorry. I like the savagery of "pock marked".
nice, masago.
nothing like snow or even rain in sight here... just the grey cover above.
Savage Butterfly: Thank you. :-)
Pamela: Yes, I believe that is the common perception.
Andrew: Yikes, please be careful.
John: Thank you, John.
Polona: Thanks, you are lucky but I'm sure it won't last for long.
Aurora: Yes, it's silly, but it satisfies and disatisfies Pamela and Savage Butterfly at the same time. :-)
At least it's warming up...
Pat: Yes, well at least it was when I wrote this haiku. Lately here its been much colder. :-)
For a short while...
I just visited Nasa's moon-pages, and one of those was pock-marked after some former meteor-war.
Meteors raining in the moon...
Full moon --
pock marked faces
pale
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