sudden gasp...
a hot air baloon drifts
right overhead
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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Ice Can Look Nice4 years ago
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A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
10 comments:
I love it when they creep up on you like that. All things are interconnected ... I see the whooshing sound from the balloon's burner ... connected to your gasp of fright ... connected to Pat Paulk's recent poem "Gasping Breaths". Enjoyed!
I really love this! "gasp" is the perfect word for L1-
Indeed!!!!
nice vaugh
john
I love to watch those things. Probably because they're so colorful, and partly because they're so quiet--til they exhale fire. Kind of like you haiku's!!
that would be an awesome sight to witness that closely.
oh, i can hear it...
well done!
SB: Thank you for sharing that.
Andrew: Thanks.
Pamela: For sure!
John: Thanks.
Pat: You are too kind. Thank you!!
Allen: Thank you for commenting, you have a great blog!
Polona: Thank you.
Had a similar experience, only it took me a while to realize it was a baloon!:)My'interpretation system' tried a number of ludicrous possibilities, like 'bird sounds' etc, before realizing the truth!:) Good one. Thanks for visiting my old blogs.
Borat (I mean Borut): Very funny. Glad you identified with this one. Thanks for commenting!
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