2008-10-30

Renhai Reflections 33: Tiny Voices


Tiny Voices

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Written 2008 Oct 28-29

Dusk deepens — the first tiny voices echo / across the neighborhood.
Carved autumn gourd — a candle lit in its head.
Porch light — a werewolf's face reflects / in the glass door.


11 comments:

Devika said...

May me the voice are too tiny..i don't seem to get the link...need my rules for my appreciation Masago..

some voice, light..that's what i get...:-)

will come again
wishes!
devika

Devika said...

shucks! this 'dyslexia' again ...
sending again...

May be the voices are too tiny..i don't seem to get the link...need the rules for my appreciation Masago..

some voice, light..that's what i get...:-)

will come again
wishes!
devika

Bill said...

One from last year (or the year before?):

eve of all saints
the little devils
at my door

Devika said...

Hey,
*Bill* has a nice one there..
i think i get that fully :-))

wishes!
devika

Janice Thomson said...

A haunting indeed - yes I do like the Renhai Vaughn - though I'm not much of a Halloween fan :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very autumn - I love it!

John McDonald said...

delightful vaughn
john

Borut said...

Brrrr... Sometimes there may only be one step between tiny voices echoing in one's head and... the warewolf's face seen in the glass door!?:)And, yet, illuminative in its own way!:)

polona said...

a perfect halloween renhai :)

Masago said...

Devika: I'm glad you are trying, hopefully today's post with the notes will make sense.

Bill: Little devils indeed... mumble grumble, little moochers... :-) Thanks!

Janice: Thanks. I'm not a big fan either but thought of some emotions and memories of the season and decided to record them as a Renhai.

Andrew: Thanks.

John: Thanks.

Borut: *smile* Thanks.

Polona: Thanks!

jem said...

Great seasonal observations. Its funny, some images seem quite creepy (the tiny voices of the first verse) and yet the light and warmth feels quite comforting.