2009-06-07

Renhai Reflections 113: Another Beginning


Another Beginning

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)

Summer clouds —
monks beneath a tree
mutter prayers. /vj

A grove of Margosa trees — /vs
stirrings under fallen leaves. /vj

Silk sheets —
the clock radio comes on
with sounds of Bach. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0153.htm

[This was written with Dr. Vidur Jyoti from India. Check the notes for background info about season usage and other features of this Renhai.]

11 comments:

RBroeker said...

The connections between verse one and three are fantastic. I love Bach and this reflection is stunning. I bow to this.

RBroeker said...

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika said...

I loved the sets, and the way the links work..

Margosa...yes, they abound the Delhi streets and i read that they play a good role in reducing air pollution..and keeping many air borne diseases off!

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

evocative Vaughn
john

Janice Thomson said...

This is wonderful - each verse presenting a lovely image. Most enjoyable.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I always like the sound of Bach!

Masago said...

Thank you all very much!

Pamela said...

silk sheets... I wish!

jem said...

I like the way the clouds from the first seem to link to the sheets from the last. That sense of lying under something soft.

Kristin Riggs said...

Okay...I'm trying to decide which I love more-listening to Bach or the feel of silk sheets. Luckily, here I don't have to decide! Love it!!!

susane said...

Your blog is beautiful, as beautiful ideas!

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