2009-06-24
Renhai Reflections 118: Seaside Breeze
Seaside Breeze
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)
Bright day —
a seagull, then another
lands nearby. /vs
The salty breeze on my face — /vs
carved slices of pineapple. /gc
Scalloped edges
of the table umbrella —
flapping, flapping... /gc
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6 comments:
Seaside -- and I just like it! :)
Nice set, Masago and Gillena :)
wishes,
devika
well done both of you
john
Vivid.
The pineapple and the salty breeze - a great couple.
Best wishes
Ralf
I can't get enough of the seaside! So I loved this one.
Very atmospheric. Those gulls, the flapping umbrella. And the middle verse very neat, sometimes taste is neglected in writing.
Thanks to your site I just appendre several things. Keep going!
voyance par mail
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