2009-06-24

Renhai Reflections 118: Seaside Breeze


Seaside Breeze

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Bright day —
a seagull, then another
lands nearby. /vs

The salty breeze on my face — /vs
carved slices of pineapple. /gc

Scalloped edges
of the table umbrella —
flapping, flapping... /gc

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6 comments:

Devika said...

Seaside -- and I just like it! :)

Nice set, Masago and Gillena :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

well done both of you
john

Bill said...

Vivid.

RBroeker said...

The pineapple and the salty breeze - a great couple.

Best wishes
Ralf

jem said...

I can't get enough of the seaside! So I loved this one.

Very atmospheric. Those gulls, the flapping umbrella. And the middle verse very neat, sometimes taste is neglected in writing.

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