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2009-06-14
Renhai Reflections 115: Midnight Stirrings
Midnight Stirrings
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Gibbous moon —
on every primrose leaf
a starlight dance. /jt
Midnight velvet breeze — /jt
a canopy of shining stars. /vs
Pre-dawn stillness —
distant harbour lights
frolic on the ripples. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0155.htm
[This was written with Janice Thomson from Canada, and was just published in the June, 2009 issue of the Lynx Journal for Linking Poets.]
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9 comments:
Very nice set, Janice and Masago
Loved it...among the best I read here :)
enjoyed this
john
I love all of this. It's so easy to assume there's nothing to see when it's dark. This proves that wrong.
Again and again I am touched by the power of your teamwork.
Best wishes
Ralf
I had to go to Websters for gibbous. (is it okay to admit that?)
Once I had that down -- I just sailed with a smile through the rest of the verse. Loved it!!
Thank you all very much!
beautiful!
These are wonderful!
Thank you Kristin!
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