2009-06-18

Renhai Reflections 116: Droppings


Droppings

A Renhai by John W. Sexton (jws) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Honey sandwich
fumbled... which side
will turn up? /vs

Broken hive, a static of bees — /jws
droppings among bear tracks. /vs

Alcor, Mizar:
cartilage of ursine tail?
or just stars? /jws

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0156.htm

[This was written with John W. Sexton from Ireland, and was just published in the June, 2009 issue of the Lynx Journal for Linking Poets.]

6 comments:

Devika said...

This really makes me wonder...how all we connect things --

yes, I too do sometimes, not knowing what to do! :)


wishes,
devika

Devika said...

forgot to say, I loved the first one,Masago...it sounded like nothing is in our hands!

and I often feel so :)

devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

ha! :)

John McDonald said...

well done to both
john

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Devika: yes, in renhai connections often pull together things we otherwise miss or take for granted.

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